Feedback

Feedback given:

To Aj: I really like your final piece especially the images and backgrounds used, I think the needing needs more work as well as you'r spelling/grammar and the timing is a bit off at times. Also the buttons at then end aren't very nice looking and one link doesn't work. Also I suggest maybe using a different font which would look less boring although I really like you'r speech bubbles.

To Adam: I really like your animation, the way the dragon changes size as it flies in/out is really good and give the impression of depth and distance. The animation could be more complicated though and maybe instead of using just one image of the dragon maybe three or four would be better and give a smoother and more visually entertaining animation. You could also develop the plot more and make the animation longer al well as adding some interactivity.

Feedback received can be found in the comments on my blog.